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CHAPTER 2 -plz critique- "Miss Montgomery!" Elizabeth looked glanced over her shoulder at a plump, curly-haired brunette of a principal bouncing her way. She slammed her locker door shut, causing a tweet of alarm from the goldfinch still perched on her shoulder, and answered the lady.
"Yes Mrs. Tolman?" she replied.
"You know we allow no pets in this academy!"
"But Mrs. Tolman, he is not my pet."
"Oh, then so explain why that bird is perched upon your shoulder."
Elizabeth shrugged a hard gesture to execute when there is a bird upon one's shoulder. "Your guess is as good as mine," was her response. "I can't seem to get it off of me. Care to try yourself?"
Mrs. Tolman's face turned red and she seemed to swell at the unintentional back-talk. "Yes, yes I do care to try." With that, she swatted
Vanguard, Chapter 1: DuncanDuncan's Journal: Day 1288
I consider myself a good man. I respect women, elders, my equals, and the dead. I say a morning prayer, and an evening one. Hell, I even thank the gods for a meal, instead of immediately chowing down in the voracious manner as the other soldiers here do. By all logical means, I should be in paradise. No really, not just because I'm a good man, but also because I should be dead by now. So I ask myself: why, oh gods up there, have I ended up in hell?
1288 days. 1288 days of my life have been spent in this misery, and I'm beginning to lose faith in the glory I was promised. Some of the rookies still live in their ignorant bliss, but I've lived long enough to realize that there's not much glory to find here. “Sing the songs of glory and march into battle—-join The Crusade today!”. Such were the words of the posters The Crusade has spread all over The Mortal Realm. Gullible fools practically stand in line for these songs of glory that th
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